“[I]t was in a small Southern city… that I once saw the surface crack for a minute and something savage, uncanny and frightening rear its head. Then the surface closed again—and when I have gone back there since, I’ve been surprised to find myself as charmed as ever by the magnolia trees and the singing darkies in the street and the sensuous warm nights. I have been charmed, too, by the bountiful hospitality and the languorous easy-going outdoor life and the almost universal good manners. But all too frequently I am the prey of a vivid nightmare that recalls what I experienced in that town five years ago.”—American novelist and short-story writer F. Scott Fitzgerald (1896-1940), “The Dance,” The Red Book Magazine (June 1926), reprinted in Ellery Queen's Mystery Magazine (March 1953)
A century
ago this month, The Red Book Magazine published something unusual for F. Scott Fitzgerald: a murder mystery. He was not completely averse to genre
fiction (his short stories “The Diamond as Big as the Ritz" and "A
Short Trip Home" have Gothic/horror elements), but his foray into
detective stories was another matter entirely.
How much of it was a lark while he did the rounds of night spots in France, where he had moved so he and his family could live more cheaply? (His output for the year consisted of the short story "Your Way and Mine" and the essay "How To Waste Material.") And how much of it was part of a fascination with murder that was leading him on a dead end in his initial stages of creating the long-gestating Tender Is the Night?
To be sure,
neither Agatha Christie, with her cunning plots, nor Dashiell Hammett, with his
terse dialogue and morally compromised characters, had much to fear by this
interloper in their territory.
But
Fitzgerald being Fitzgerald, he had to bring something of himself to this
exercise. There’s his fascination with the South, where he had met his wife
Zelda; his almost effortlessly lyrical writing style; and his “flaming youth”
characters, this time transplanted to a Charleston small-town ball.
And with a
single phrase that sounds distinctly politically incorrect in our time—“singing
darkies in the street”—he introduces a concern he had slipped into his novel
from the year before, The Great Gatsby: race.
Recall
that from that Jazz Age masterpiece, his hideously brutal and idiotic recipient
of inherited wealth, Tom Buchanan, launches into an incoherent rant about
“Nordic” superiority—a precursor of the “great replacement theory” advocated
most prominently today by Tucker Carlson.
In “The
Dance,” suspicion of the murder that unexpectedly breaks out in this “small
Southern city” falls on one of the “singing darkies” evoked by the story’s
female narrator—and the threat of lynching hangs very much in the air.
“The
Dance” was not included among the 43 tales collected in 1989 by literary
scholar Matthew J. Bruccoli for The Short Stories of F. Scott Fitzgerald.
But as far as I’m concerned, just about everything Fitzgerald wrote had some
mark of charm or style—and this curious work of short fiction is no different.




