“The
goddess, rising, asks her guests to stay,
Who blindly follow where she leads the way.
Eurylochus alone of all the band,
Suspecting fraud, more prudently remain’d.
On thrones around with downy coverings graced,
With semblance fair, the unhappy men she placed.
Milk newly press’d, the sacred flour of wheat,
And honey fresh, and Pramnian wines the treat:
But venom’d was the bread, and mix’d the bowl,
With drugs of force to darken all the soul:
Soon in the luscious feast themselves they lost,
And drank oblivion of their native coast.
Instant her circling wand the goddess waves,
To hogs transforms them, and the sty receives.
No more was seen the human form divine;
Head, face, and members, bristle into swine:
Still cursed with sense, their minds remain alone,
And their own voice affrights them when they groan.
Meanwhile the goddess in disdain bestows
The mast and acorn, brutal food! and strows
The fruits and cornel, as their feast, around;
Now prone and grovelling on unsavoury ground.”—English poet Alexander Pope (1688-1744), translation of Homer’s The Odyssey (1726)
I’ve
had one inquiry so far about whether I’ve seen Christopher Nolan’s
adaptation of The Odyssey and if so, what I thought of it. So, here
goes:
Yes,
I saw it over the weekend and don’t regret doing so. On a scale of 1 to 10 with
10 the highest, I gave it 7 1/2 to 8 stars. The visuals and special effects
were superb, as was much of the acting.
But
at least 30 minutes could have been cut, and much of the dialogue was muffled
by the ambient noise in the environment around the characters. Maureen Dowd’s
column on Sunday was correct about all its deviations from the original.
Still,
Hollywood has done far worse in adapting classics, and it wasn’t as painful for
me to experience as Richmond Lattimore’s translations of The Iliad and The
Odyssey in my college Literary Humanities course. (Achilles in his tent
didn’t pout half so much as I at the prospect of enduring Homer’s endless
repetitions, rendered by Lattimore with teeth-gnashing fidelity.)
With
Hollywood’s latest attempt at Homer, the 2017 translation of The Odyssey
by Emily Wilson has attracted the lion's share of attention, with retrospective respect given previous
ones by Robert Fitzgerald and Robert Fagles.
Virtually
nobody has talked about Alexander Pope’s, published in five volumes in 1725 and
1726 (with the help of two collaborators), though it was celebrated as a
literary masterpiece, and an improvement on prior translations) in its time.
With the poet’s characteristic rhyming couplets, the cliché is that it’s far
more Pope than Homer.
Though
Lattimore’s translation is supposed to be extremely faithful to the original
Greek, with its hexameter meter and repeated use of epithets, I found the
passage from Pope of one of the most famous episodes from the book (and one of
the most memorable scenes from the Nolan film) powerful—perhaps because the
couplets exert tremendous compact force.
Who blindly follow where she leads the way.
Eurylochus alone of all the band,
Suspecting fraud, more prudently remain’d.
On thrones around with downy coverings graced,
With semblance fair, the unhappy men she placed.
Milk newly press’d, the sacred flour of wheat,
And honey fresh, and Pramnian wines the treat:
But venom’d was the bread, and mix’d the bowl,
With drugs of force to darken all the soul:
Soon in the luscious feast themselves they lost,
And drank oblivion of their native coast.
Instant her circling wand the goddess waves,
To hogs transforms them, and the sty receives.
No more was seen the human form divine;
Head, face, and members, bristle into swine:
Still cursed with sense, their minds remain alone,
And their own voice affrights them when they groan.
Meanwhile the goddess in disdain bestows
The mast and acorn, brutal food! and strows
The fruits and cornel, as their feast, around;
Now prone and grovelling on unsavoury ground.”—English poet Alexander Pope (1688-1744), translation of Homer’s The Odyssey (1726)
It’s difficult to top, for instance,
these lines about the sorceress Circe: “Instant her circling wand the goddess
waves,/To hogs transforms them, and the sty receives.”
Pope’s
Homer translations were not covered in the English Restoration literature class
I took in college, nor in the university’s Literary Humanities curriculum. But
based on the passage above, at least, they can still be read with great
pleasure.
(The
image accompanying this post shows Samantha Morton as Circe in Christopher
Nolan’s film.)

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